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  1. theorem

    theorem Corporal (5) Member

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    For teachers:
    If you are a fool, keep it cool, pretend to be smart, dont fart, dont yell, just tell...
    Pupils chat, grades are bad...
    Are u mad ? :p
     
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    jgalloway64 Master Sergeant (10) Member

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    For @kChamp:
    I'm sick of your absence, your bugs are like labyrinths
    One after another they come, your game's steadily becoming less fun
    Especially since you only care about your sum, your questionable motives are quite dumb :oops:

    Is this even a poem? :D oh well
     
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    For fathers don't play a lot,don't sleep a lot,practice your lessons, help your mom
     
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    theorem Corporal (5) Member

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    Life and Death
    The pain becomes less,
    untill you release your last breath.
    There is nothing to gain,
    so why keep suffering from pain?
    Let go, who cares?
    Becoming a ghost,
    travelling through the spheres.
    Fly through the sky,
    without feeling the air.
    Fall asleep and never wake up.
    The hole in the matrix,
    a tiny little bug...
    Whether you succeded or sucked,
    in the end its meaningless.
    The cheer, the tearingness,
    all gone...
    Enjoy the moment,
    its over in the next sec,
    will never come back.
    The grave is calling,
    leaves are falling,
    tie the knot,
    end the plot,
    break the chain,
    what is left to gain... ?
     
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    RazoreOP Private First Class (4) Member

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    For anyone on the forums,
    happy new years,
    It really brings tears,
    Looking back at old times,
    I dont like mimes,
    Don't troll people,
    It really makes them mad,
    If you know what i mean,
    Please dont make them sad,
    This poem doesnt really make sense,
    So i feel somewhat tense,
    Everyone out there,
    Im telling you now,
    Happy new years,
    And dont forget.
    IM IN LOVE WITH THE COCO.(Wait what?)
     
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  6. idontlike

    idontlike Unconfirmed Member

    jk happy new years
     
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    BLACKED.com Lieutenant General (23) Member

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    This one's great.
     
  8. Taylor

    Taylor Brigadier General (21) Former Moderator

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    "Broken Friend"

    Just when you think everything is fine
    something bad happens in the blink of an eye
    Your friend starts to tear himself apart
    Preaching all he has to do is hit restart

    Your brain freezes and tries searching for an answer
    flipping through the pages you can't can't find a cure to this cancer
    In the end you realize there's nothing you can do
    Cause if he's gonna fix himself, hes gotta do it with you.



    Script were a pretty good inspiration as well. :D
    The ending was supposed to be "he's gotta do it without you", but Kate said she liked it that way so I left it.
     
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    theorem Corporal (5) Member

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    Deception and Dreams

    Is it reality or deception ?
    Our goal is the same,
    to make our wishes come true,
    but did you
    read the caption ?
    Isnt it a shame,
    to live large and ignore
    the suffering and dying
    of people who live at the floor,
    who starve to death... ?
    Newspapers keep lying aloud,
    they keep crying about
    issues which are not even worth to read
    and pretend to be
    the morality...
    But they judge wrong, intentionally...
    Double standards keep the deception alive,
    they help to drive
    the highway of illusion.
    Are we sane or is it confusion ?
     
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    theorem Corporal (5) Member

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    Escape from reality

    Drift away, close your eyes
    its like dying,
    just without crying...
    Dreams are falling,
    loop around in your head,
    in your comfortable bed,
    your soul is calling
    for sleep and rest.
    Escape from reality,
    its easy, just go...
    Time is meaningless,
    it is deceiving.
    The world is turning,
    souls are sleeping.
    In dreams there is no time,
    you are free like a bird,
    let your soul shine,
    leave behind the dirt...
     
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    theorem Corporal (5) Member

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    Money

    You drank your coffee,
    prepared for work.
    Think alike as the other jerks...
    Dont think about your job,
    just follow the routine.
    You cant change the world because you are like a machine...
    Money keeps you busy,
    it keeps your brain dizzy.
    The corruption and greed,
    its cruel, indeed.
    work around the clock,
    keep your thoughts behind fog,
    from rags to riches...
    Simple business.
    The poor become worse,
    the rich become richer.
    Its a curse.
    If you see it or not,
    whats behind the plot,
    the dot
    on the i
    its reality.
     
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    referee11 First Lieutenant (16) Member

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    I swear, try reading this comment while looking at his avatar's face. It is just so weird...
     
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    BLACKED.com Lieutenant General (23) Member

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    Oh my god your poetries deserve three mushrooms.
    Well that's how I look 90% of the time.
     
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    referee11 First Lieutenant (16) Member

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    Your face in the avatar looks so irritated, it is almost hilariously creepy when put with your comment...
     
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    theorem Corporal (5) Member

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    School

    School steals your time,
    it pushes you into categories,
    even if this doesn`t rhyme,
    it`s true, believe me.
    Teachers keep you under control,
    they break you, Big Brother greets: Hello! ;)
    The system is foggy,
    don`t be cocky,
    you can`t change it by force,
    build a trojan horse,
    break it from behind
    and use your mind.
     
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    theorem Corporal (5) Member

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    Chess Game

    They say: "Life is a game."
    Live it with glory or shame,
    its your choice.
    You should listen to the voice
    inside your chest,
    try your best
    and survive
    the game called: Life.
    Nobody said it is your fault
    that the world is how it is.
    Cruel and cold.
    But its your responsibility,
    to change it and gain credibility.

    But if you close your eyes
    and ignore what you see,
    it is your fault
    that the world dies...
     
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    Candor Forum Peasant Moderator

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    make one about me :3

    waiiit .-. i see my name in one ._.
     
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    theorem Corporal (5) Member

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    lol yes, there is one. :p
     
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    referee11 First Lieutenant (16) Member

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    Birds
    I hold my hand out
    To a bird who
    Happened to pass my me
    Just by chance.

    It looks at me
    Through its small
    Wondering eyes and then
    It takes off.

    A free-verse (unconventional) poem
     
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    theorem Corporal (5) Member

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    Admire the soul

    Little Bird
    fly fly fly!
    Beneath the dirt,
    above the sky.

    Go on and sing your melodies,
    wash away the sorrow
    What if there is no tomorrow?
    What if our world goes on but cries?
    If it dies...?

    Keep your soul in the air,
    be cheerful but take care!
    Some people down there
    wouldn`t care about your death.
    Or they catch you, sell your body and soul.

    So keep this in mind: Stay cheer- and careful!
     
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    CHOPPER60000 Corporal (5) Member

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    i am not good in poem making but..let's try :D

    P i z z a
    Pizza o Pizza,
    teacher asking 2 three za?
    i saying nothing,above you me
    i below of you thinking o thinking about ya
    saying oh ya ya,slurp and all
    please here you fall
    but i am not tall

    pizza o pizza
    thundering my hunger,raining in my dreams
    letting not me sleep,letting not me play
    pizza o pizza where you are?
    Dominos Pizza or Pizza hut pizza,i don't care
    from whatever company you are,i am not so far
    thinking just of you

    Pizza o Pizza,
    teacher asking 2 three za?


    ---------------THE END--------------
    how was it?


     
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    theorem Corporal (5) Member

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    Hahaha nice poem! Could it be you are hungry ? :p I like pizza too. :)
     
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    CHOPPER60000 Corporal (5) Member

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    yup i like pizza too,i like eating it :D
     
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    Taylor Brigadier General (21) Former Moderator

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    So I mentioned a while ago I'd post to this but never found the time. Sometimes you have lack of inspiration as well. I apologize if this isn't that good but threw it together in 20 minutes.
    Sure if I worked on it harder it would be better but its just a poem. I'll edit it sometime but certain parts are very good. Things take time anyways not a short amount of minutes in writing anyways haha.

    I'll try to post more ... maybe of ones I wrote a while ago. :p



    You Would Know


    When in doubt you should let it out
    Even if theres nothing you feel comfortable to talk about
    Theres only one thing you should never do
    Lead someone on to eventually lie to

    I have no problem moving on
    Just feel you should of treated me better than a worthless pawn
    Was it so hard to admit this was all an act?
    Swallow some pride, maybe it'll make up for the honesty you lack


    We'll always both have our opinions on why this happened
    Despite that I'll choose not to view you in a negative way
    I feel its not worth pointing the finger about who was right
    If in the end all that was accomplished is no sleep at night

    Bad enough these songs I love make me think of you
    Though in hindsight thats not to bad, just something I gotta work through
    To some questions I know I'll never have an answer
    Despite this I'll strive to not let it eat me alive like cancer


    When in doubt you should let it out
    Even if theres nothing you feel comfortable to talk about
    Theres only one thing you should never do
    Lead someone on to eventually lie to

    I have no problem moving on
    Just feel you should of treated me better than a worthless pawn
    Was it so hard to admit this was all an act?
    Swallow some pride, maybe it'll make up for the honesty you lack

    So go along like you were never phased
    We both know I was just a piece in your little game
    A temporary thrill described by word's like love and fun
    Remember to throw me away when your finished using me and are done

    Refused to believe it was all all talk despite the clear signs I saw
    Guess thats why when you left I didn't feel a need to drop my jaw
    Sure it shocks a few but if they payed attention
    People change all the time without a mention
     
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    bobbb7 Staff Sergeant (8) Member

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    can someone pin this
    for all the times when
    romantic sentimental maudlin
    hapless lost fellows
    just looking for a place
    to express their thoughts
    can no longer contain their emotions
    and thus release a flood?

    lol and no this isn't a poem
     

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